Ten Planets
Greg Walklin
Translated by Lisa Dillman
âYou know how predictable I find speculative fiction,â Pirg says to Zorg, in one of the stories of âTen Planets,â Yuri Herreraâs new collection. âItâs formulaic, itâs contrived, itâs adolescent.â Zorg is a lonely, non-human writer, a sort of teenagerâdespite being 75 years oldâwho spends a lot of his time ârapturously touching his own tet.â Pirg is more mature, with many more âtetsâ than Zorg, whom he loves âbecause she was able to appreciate the importance of stories, especially new or re-newed stories.â She possess a keen critical eye, but has been mostly dismissive of Zorgâs writing. âI donât really know what you were expecting me to say,â she tells him after reading. But Zorg hopes his new story will change her mind.
One wonders what Pirg would think about the 20 speculative stories in âTen Planets.â Despite her dismissals of the genre, these speculative stories manage not to be adolescent or contrived. These are, in fact, varied, mature, and imaginative, displaying a range of influence and technique; they struggle in equal measure against both the bounds of typical fiction and the tropes of science fiction. Herrera, from Mexico, is also the author of the novels âKingdom Cons,â and of âSigns Preceding the End of the World,â which was his first book to be translated into English. He has two other books of stories, as well. All of his fiction has been translated by Lisa Dillman.
Perhaps Herreraâs backgroundâwriting in Spanish, having lived in Mexico but studying extensively in the United Statesâinforms the way many of these stories cross borders and involve the mixing of peoples and populations. In âThe Earthling,â the difference between Martians and Earthlings is made clear: âWhereas on Earth faces told of desires and of battles lost, faces here were walled offâŠthey appeared and disappeared so imperceptibly as to be almost undetectableâŠ.â In âThe Monstersâ Art,â captured âmonstersâ appear to be anything but, while their captors are cruel and actually monstrous. A long history of âThe Onesâ and âThe Othersâ makes for the main conflict in âThe Conspirators.â 
Throughout this collection, tones and styles intermix, as well, especially humor and horror. âThe Earthlingâ begins as a supernatural mystery but ends in ironic laughter; while both âHouse Taken Over,â a Shirley Jackson-esque tale about a house controlling its residents, and âInventory of Human Diversity,â about an alien zoo, start as a humorous takes on systems and then transmogrify. But the dominant through line of these stories is subversion. Herrera is careful not to fall into the common clichĂ©s of science fiction; he spends barely any time world building, as place has never been one of his big fictional concerns. If other stories, like âThe Obituaristâ or âLiving Muscleâ resemble works by other famous writers (Philip K. Dick and Italo Calvino, respectively) it is only in the ways those writers defied expectations and consistently surprised. âThe Cosmonaut,â one of the most memorable in the book, mixes the noir of Dick with the some of the vague, religious mystery of Carl Saganâs âContact.â Two stories, both named âThe Objects,â take different looks at a mysterious, depopulated world.
Surprise animates âFlat Map,â âObverse,â and âThe Other Theory,â which all appear to be connected, but not in obvious ways. In fact, itâs the surprising ways that these stories interact that make them compelling. All are, well, off the mapâand it canât be too often that a science fiction story uses one of the most obvious fictions science has disproven (that the Earth is flat) as the basis for a story. Certainly, Andy Weir would never dream of it.
A lack of surprise, meanwhile, fills out other stories, which approach interesting topics sheathed in ironic, boring bureaucracy. âAppendix 15, number 2: The Exploration of Agent Probiiâ hides behind its banal title; the story canvasses a planet of people who do not share a language, at least as we think of it, and instead must have different kinds of sex to communicate. Bureaucracy as a motif also appears in âConsolidation of Spirits,â involving the red tape of the spirit world; âThe Inventory of Human Diversity,â about a bored zookeeper at an alien zoo; and âThe Monstersâ Art,â set in a banally evil facility that keeps supposed âmonstersâ locked up and confiscates their art. Employing bureaucracies in science fiction plots is not a new concept, but Herrera still makes it feel fresh.
Another refreshing aspect of âTen Planetsâ is how the stories can be read politicallyâbut not in a partisan or myopic manner. Herrera has said that âliterature always entails a political responsibility,â but should give everyone tools to be a âconscious citizen.â âHouse Taken Overâ warns the reader of letting technology govern our existence, while âThe Monstersâ Artâ could have been a parable of Hannah Arendtâs. Bleakness lurks around many of the corners in this book, including right from the first story, âThe Science of Extinction,â where a man losing his mind isnât able to fully understand the world ending around him. As itâs not too difficult to read this story as a political allegory, the alarm it raises never quite dies down.
Herreraâs significant strength as a writer lies in his concepts and ideas, and the magical way he creates mood (never better in this volume than in the first story named âThe Objectsâ). What is most interesting about the writing in the English edition of âTen Planets,â then, is the hurdle of translation. No translation is easy workâbut Dillman, for this volume, certainly had to run and jump quite a few times. Herreraâs stories are filled with portmanteaus and neologisms and specific use of Spanish slang. In one of the two stories titled âThe Objects,â for example, Herrera refers to an item he calls a âtenmeaqui,â which, Dillman reports in the Translatorâs Note, can be used in the same sense as âidiot boxâ or âpacifier,â in some contexts. Of course, neither âidiot boxâ nor âpacifierâ fit the type of thing in the storyâwhich is a sort of tracking device for peopleâso Dillman cleverly devised the term âMiniminderâ to fill the gap.
Zorgâs approach to writing does a reasonable job of summarizing âTen Planets.â He writes stories âabout fantastical beings trapped in one way or another by bodily limitations, geographical limitations, epistemological limitations: people who were always doing battle and almost always losing but who from time to time managed to break through those limitations and then beautiful things occurred.â When the the little bits of humanity (or whatever âhumanityâ would mean to a non-human) among all of the exotic worlds and ideas crops up, the book is at its best. Itâs Veliaâs frantic searching for her man and her daughter in âThe Objects.â Or the frantic cries of the human stuck in the alienâs zoo in âInventory of Human Diversity.â Or Zorgâs excitement at showing his new story to Pirg, which he has dubbed âThe Quixote.â Even if this turns out to be mostly a retread of Cervantes, Pirg doesnât seem to notice. She is too wrapped up, finally, in admiration, which was all he wanted all along.
Greg Walklin is an attorney and writer living in Lincoln, Nebraska. His book reviews have appeared in The Millions, Necessary Fiction, The Colorado Review, and the Lincoln Journal-Star, among other publications. He has also published several pieces of short fiction. Twitter: @gwalklin

Yuri Herrera (born 1970) is a Mexican political scientist, editor, and contemporary writer. He currently teaches at Tulane University in New Orleans.
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